Winter sunsets- crisp as the crackle of twigs beneath a traveling soul's footsteps.
I only seem to be chasing sunsets. Numbers and figures are of no means to me. Science and progress are only meer fragments of the time and space lodged between dusk on the horizon. No instrument can capture the tune of melodic harmony that sits upon the brink of day to night. No eyes have truly see the beauty of a day until they have witnessed the dwindling fingers of the sun stretch up as if they are searching for the ledge to grasp onto before they fall. The longer you behold the sight, the cleaner you become. A cleansing of the mind with each numbing breath you draw into your lungs. As you sip on the essence of the natural surroundings, you can drift away from the troubles of day to day. Sometimes, I wish i could drink easier.
Drifting so, Drifting so far away unto the cloak of night, doted with lights of hope. Wishes. Dreams. Prayers. Affection. Cheer. Every piece you hold true, released and displayed for the world to view. Every perspective slightly a-skew. Meaningless science will tell you, every "wish" is only a flame, ignited in space, farther away than any human grasp. I refuse to believe. Wishes are a way of Hope, hope is embedded into every human, so that makes me naive. I am completely content.
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you captured exactly how i feel about it..
ReplyDeleteIn your failed attempt to use extensive vocabulary, you've lacked a general plot and thus the left the general reader stunned in awe over the large words that you've chosen to convey. In general terms, what this piece has is substance, not backbone. Learn to fucking write and brainstorm before you sit down in front of a computer.
ReplyDeleteidk who you are or who you THINK you are but i dont appreciate what you've said...at all.
ReplyDeletemaybe i dont want you to read this, and maybe, just maybe!, that is how it is meant to be.
i didnt want to brain storm or sit in front of a computer for a reason. writing is a form of creativity and doesnt always need to have contruction to it. if this piece was meant to, i would have corrected spelling and grammatical errors as well as a body and all sorts of other stuff. So, take your ego elsewhere. Your insignificant as it is anyway.
i didnt want to brainstorm. i sat infront of the computer for a reason*
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